The article is written really well but starts out by talking about the opening act for two paragraphs. I think the writer should’ve started talking about Hozier first and left the opening act until the end.
It’s also a tad bit stale. I wish the writer would work in some enthusiasm into the article. I think it could benefit from the writer putting there voice in the article.
I also think that the headline could use some work. It doesn’t really grab your attention unless you like the artist.
Link: http://mtsusidelines.com/2015/03/hozier-performs-at-ryman-auditorium/
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